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*Several American spellings slip through in part 1, including "grill" instead of "grille", "magnetize" instead of "magnetise", "judgment" instead of "judgement", and "energized" instead of "energised".
*Several American spellings slip through in part 1, including "grill" instead of "grille", "magnetize" instead of "magnetise", "judgment" instead of "judgement", and "energized" instead of "energised".
*"...Machine Man is the one to insure he is punished!" Unless this is a pun on his day job, that should probably be ''en''sure.
*"...Machine Man is the one to insure he is punished!" Unless this is a pun on his day job, that should probably be ''en''sure.
*Cards on the table, I don't know if "Everywhere grow monuments to man's inhumanity to his fellow man!" is grammatically correct or not, but it ''sounds'' weird.
*"––whatever the bands of energy accidentally touches..." If it's plural bands of energy, they accidentally ''touch''.
*"––whatever the bands of energy accidentally touches..." If it's plural bands of energy, they accidentally ''touch''.