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*The drinking establishment is referred to as the "Milktoast Malt Shop" in dialogue in both this story and "Some Answers", but the sign as actually seen on the building spells it "Milk Toast Malt Shop".
*If "Crocogater" is a portmanteau of "crocodile" and "alligator" – and the shortening of the word to "gator" suggests it is – then it's spelled wrong.
*On the first page, the logo on the Malt Shop has "Milk Toast" and "Malt Shop" on two lines of text. In the close-up on page four, the text is on one line.
*In the second panel of page three, Robota's face is the same colour as the pink background.
*On the fifth page, the boss bartender alternates whether he's across the counter from Squink or not during the course of their conversation. It's decent of Squink to let him go back around the bar before throwing his sundae dish at him.
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