Introducing Machine Man: Difference between revisions
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Aside from the shuffling of pages... |
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*The newly added (and plain text) narration on the second page suggests that X-35 and X-51 were the only robots remaining, which isn't correct – X-35's psychotic break was the impetus to retire the project, and thus the detonation order was given ''afterwards''. |
*The newly added (and plain text) narration on the second page suggests that X-35 and X-51 were the only robots remaining, which isn't correct – X-35's psychotic break was the impetus to retire the project, and thus the detonation order was given ''afterwards''. |
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*The phrase "pastoral splendor and silence" is altered to "pastoral splendour and silence", with the "and" re-lettered and condensed to fit in the smaller gap between words. |
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*Two instances of the spelling "humanized" are corrected to "humanised". |
*Two instances of the spelling "humanized" are corrected to "humanised". |
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*More plain text narration after Stack dies: "NOW READ ON, FOR THE FIRST OF MACHINE MAN'S AMAZING ADVENTURES..." |
*More plain text narration after Stack dies: "NOW READ ON, FOR THE FIRST OF MACHINE MAN'S AMAZING ADVENTURES..." |
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